Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，给学校英语报投稿，介绍你们上个月开展的一次班级活动。

注意：1. 词数不少于60；

2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Last month, we went to the exhibition displaying China’s outstanding achievements over the past five years.

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Answer 1

【答案】Last month, we went to the exhibition displaying China’s outstanding achievements over the past five years. As soon as we arrived, a guide gave us an introduction to the exhibition. While listening, we made some notes carefully. We fell excited and couldn’t wait to start the visit. Later, we looked around in the exhibition hall. We were all inspired by the various exhibits, including the models of the high-speed train. We took a lot of photos and were proud of the achievements of our country.

The next day, we had a discussion at school about how to present what we had seen. We finally decided on a class meeting. Immediately we devoted ourselves to preparing the presentations.

At the class meeting, we delivered speeches in turn, sharing the most impressive parts of the exhibition and expressing the confidence in the future of our country.

Both the exhibition and the class meeting are memorable experiences, which will encourage us forever.

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇看图作文。根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，给学校英语报投稿，介绍你们上个月开展的一次班级活动。认真阅读四幅图画，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据图画内容列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文是看图作文，文章能准确、恰当地体现出图画中的内容，语言流畅，结构布局合理，并在句中使用高级句子。As soon as we arrived, a guide gave us an introduction to the exhibition.as soon as引导时间状语从句；While listening, we made some notes carefully.现在分词做时间状语；we had a discussion at school about how to present what we had seen.what引导宾语从句；we delivered speeches in turn, sharing the most impressive parts of the exhibition and expressing the confidence in the future of our country.现在分词做伴随状态；, which will encourage us forever. which引导非限制性定语从句。