Question

14．假如你是李华，是英国某所学校的交换生，你几天前在英国的一个商店买的手机坏了．请你根据以下提示，给该商店客服发一封电子邮件．
1．写作目的；
2．具体问题：如手机黑屏，不能重启等；
3．解决办法：如维修，更换新手机等．
注意：1．词数在100字左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Sir or Madam，
    My name is Li Hua，an exchange student from China．I'm writing to complain about the quality of the mobile phone which I bought from your store．
It unexpectedly went wrong a few days after I bought it．The screen turned out to be black while I was taking photos．I tried to restart it according to the instructions，but it still failed to work．Therefore，I'm sure there is something wrong with the phone．I am hoping that you direct me to a store where I may get it repaired or change it for a new one within the next 3 days．Since your store has gained a good reputation for customer satisfaction，I am confident you will process my complaint at your earlier convenience．
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 高分句型
句型一：
The screen turned out to be black while I was taking photos．当我拍照的时候，屏幕就变黑了． turned out to be表示"结果是，原来是"．
句型二：
I am hoping that you direct me to a store where I may get it repaired or change it for a new one within the next 3 days．用where引导地点状语从句，我希望在接下来的三天内，你指引我可以去修理或者更换新手机的店铺．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
      My name is Li Hua，an exchange student from China．I'm writing to complain about the quality of the mobile phone which I bought from your store．（写作目的）
It unexpectedly went wrong a few days after I bought it．The screen turned out to be black while I was taking photos．【高分句型一】I tried to restart it according to the instructions，but it still failed to work．Therefore，I'm sure there is something wrong with the phone．（具体问题）I am hoping that you direct me to a store where I may get it repaired or change it for a new one within the next 3 days．【高分句型二】Since your store has gained a good reputation for customer satisfaction，I am confident you will process my complaint at your earlier convenience．（解决办法）
      Looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours Sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                           Li Hua

点评 作文考查学生对英语的表达能力．提纲类作文要注意要点齐全，不可遗漏，注意人称和时态，注意语句连贯，思路清晰．