Question

4．"五•一"小长假即将开始，请根据提示写一篇英语短文，谈谈你打算如何安排你的假期生活．内容要点应包括：
*和同学一起野餐
*反思半学期以来的学习，确定新的学习目标，改进学习方法
*补习弱科
①短文的内容要连贯、完整；
②短文单词数：100词左右
③参考词汇：去野餐go for a picnic  反思reflect on  学习方法 studying method
④开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．
The May Day holiday is coming．We all feel excited about it．After all，after two months'study，we are all very tired．First，I will go for a picnic with my classmates．The weather in May is always very fine．I'm sure we'll have great fun and relax ourselves a lot．Second，I will reflect on my study in the last two months to find my shortcomings．Then，I will set a new goal and improve my studying method in order to make greater progress in the near future．The third thing that I want to do is to learn some English，because my English is not very good（高分句型一）．But I know it is very important if I'm to succeed（高分句型二）．Of course，I am also going to help my mother do some housework．（五一小长假的计划安排）
Now，I am looking forward to enjoying my life in the holiday．I believe it can be very wonderful．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们写一篇作文，谈谈打算如何安排你的五一小长假生活，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般将来时，内容要点包括：和同学一起野餐；反思半学期以来的高中生活，确定新的学习目标，改进学习方
法，补习弱科；帮助家长做家务活．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为五一小长假的计划安排．第二部分为期盼五一小长假的迫切心情．
重点短语与句型：After all 毕竟；reflect on 反思；make progress 取得进步； do some housework做家务；look forward to盼望；
高分句型一：The third thing that I want to do is to learn some English，because my English is not very good．此句用了that引导定语从句，because引导原因状语从句．
高分句型二：But I know it is very important if I'm to succeed．此句用了if引导条件状语从句．

解答 The May Day holiday is coming．We all feel excited about it．After all，after two months'study，we are all very tired．First，I will go for a picnic with my classmates．The weather in May is always very fine．I'm sure we'll have great fun and relax ourselves a lot．Second，I will reflect on my study in the last two months to find my shortcomings．Then，I will set a new goal and improve my studying method in order to make greater progress in the near future．The third thing that I want to do is to learn some English，because my English is not very good（高分句型一）．But I know it is very important if I'm to succeed（高分句型二）．Of course，I am also going to help my mother do some housework．（五一小长假的计划安排）
      Now，I am looking forward to enjoying my life in the holiday．I believe it can be very wonderful．（期盼五一小长假的迫切心情）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．