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14．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Today is my birthday and I'm so excited about it．In the morning I left a note on the table from my mum and it said，"Today is my birthday．Don't forget it!"
When it was time to leave school I couldn't wait to go home．When I open the door，there wasn't anybody in the house．There was only a note saying，：We can't go home early tonight，Mum and Dad．"I was so sadly that I couldn't eat anything．I just did my homework but waited for them．
And then，things was changed completely．It was about time for dinner，my mother called and told me to go to the restaurant near our house．When I got there I couldn't believed my eye．Everybody was there：my parents，my relatives，my friends and even my classmates．There was so many gifts and a big cake．How a surprising birthday party!We had a good time and it was the best birthday party ever．

分析 今天是我的生日，一大早我就给妈妈留了个便条提醒她．放学时我迫不及待地跑回家，却发现家里没有人，只有一个便条写着：我们今天会回来很晚．爸妈．看到这我非常伤心，什么东西都不想吃，只是写着作业等他们．就在这时事情完全有了变化，到了晚饭时间妈妈打电话要我去附近的饭店．当我到了那里，我几乎不能相信我的眼睛，我的父母，亲戚，朋友甚至同学都在这里，这里有很多礼物和一个大蛋糕．这是一个多么令人吃惊的生日晚会！

解答 Today is my birthday and I'm so excited about it．In the morning I left a note on the table from my mum and it said，"Today is my birthday．Don't forget it!"
When it was time to leave school I couldn't wait to go home．When I open the door，there wasn't anybody in the house．There was only a note saying，：We can't go home early tonight，Mum and Dad．"I was so sadly that I couldn't eat anything．I just did my homework butwaited for them．
And then，things was changed completely．It was about time for dinner，my mother called and told me to go to the restaurant near our house．When I got there I couldn't believed my eye．Everybody was there：my parents，my relatives，my friends and even my classmates．There was so many gifts and a big cake．How a surprising birthday party!We had a good time and it was the best birthday party  ever．
详解：
1．from改为for；考查介词，分析句意应为"我在桌子上给妈妈留了个便条"，这里用介词for表示目的．
2．open改为opened；考查动词的时态，分析上下文可知open这个动作发生在过去，故用一般过去时．
3．sadly改为sad；考查形容词，这里用形容词作系动词was的表语．
4．but改为and；考查连词，结合语境分析句意为"我只有写着作业等他们"可知此处没有转折关系，而是并列关系，所以用and．
5．And改为But；考查连词，分析上下文，前面讲到父母都不在家，"我"非常难过，后面一转讲到"事情完全发生了变化"，所以这应当是转折关系，故用but，but then意为"然而"．
6．去掉was；考查动词的语态，分析句子结构可知，主语things 是动词change 的使用者，要用主动语态，故去掉was．
7．believed改为believe；考查动词，情态动词could后面要跟动词原形，故用believe．
8．eye改为eyes；考查名词的复数，分析句意应为"我不敢相信我的双眼"，故应该用复数eyes．
9．was改为were；考查就近一致原则，在there be 结构中，谓语动词与后面第一个主语保持一致，即这里与 so many gifts 保持一致，故用复数were．
10．How 改为What；考查感叹句，感叹句有what引导和how引导两种形式，how后面跟形容词或副词，what后面跟名词，这里a surprising birthday party是名词性短语，所以前面要用what引导．

点评 短文改错时要先通读全文，整体理解短文的基本大意，然后分析句子间的结构关系，运用所掌握的基本语言知识从细节上加以分析，找出文中的错误并加以改正．

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