题目内容
16.假如你是Mary,在报纸上看到一则招聘售货员的广告,你觉得这个工作很适合你,于是决定写一封应聘信.内容:1.信息的来源及你的想法.
2.自我介绍.
3.你的设想或计划.
4.address:No.176,Sunlight Road; Tel:1378643****.
注意:1.语言通顺;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.词数120左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
4.不得使用真实姓名或学校名称.
Dear Mr.Smith,
My name is Mary.I'm glad to write to you. .
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息写一封应聘信,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:信息的来源及你的想法;自我介绍;你的设想或计划;address:No.176,Sunlight Road; Tel:1378643****.2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:Firstly首先;Secondly其次;What's more而且;Last but not least最后同样最重要的是;look forward to盼望;
I can not only write English essays,but also speak fluent English.(高分句型一)
People around me all like to make friends with me,because I'm always ready to help them when they are in trouble.(高分句型二)
If you are willing to give me the chance to work in your company,please write to No.176 Sunlight Road or call me at 1378643****.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Mr.Smith,
My name is Mary.I'm glad to write to you.I know from the newspaper that you want a salesgirl.I think I'm fit for the job and want to get the job.(信息的来源及你的想法)
Firstly,I'm healthy,active and creative,so I'm energetic to do my job well.Secondly,I graduated from college,and my English is very good.I can not only write English essays,but also speak fluent English.(高分句型一)What's more,I'm friendly and outgoing.(自我介绍)People around me all like to make friends with me,because I'm always ready to help them when they are in trouble.(高分句型二)Last but not least,I have the ability to make the goods attractive.(设想或计划)
If you are willing to give me the chance to work in your company,please write to No.176 Sunlight Road or call me at 1378643****.(高分句型三)(联系方式) I'm looking forward to your early reply.Thank you!
Yours sincerely,
Mary
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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A.122w.4th St.Los Angeles,CA
B.952s.Broadway Los Angeles,CA
C.2121E.7th Place Los Angeles,CA
D.1050s.Flower St.Los Angeles,CA
22.What foods does the restaurant Bestia mainly serve?B
A.The wild food.
B.Italian-style foods.
C.Meatballs and fish.
D.Different kinds of pasta.
23.If you want to learn about Latin food,you can callC
A.213-244-1422
B.213-514-5724
C.213-749-1460
D.213-687-0300.