Question

【题目】你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：

你建议的线路；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。

注意：1.词数100左右

2.适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I’m happy receive your letter and know you’re coming to China. Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along theYangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.

Hope you’ll have a good time in China.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：写作时首先审题，本题体裁为建议信，属于常规复习内容。选择其中一条线路，围绕中国传统文化的主线去写就基本能扣题，稍微需要注意题干要点之间的界限，确保要点齐全。其次要考虑高分词语和句型的选用，从句、非谓语动词、倒装、强调句型等都是可考虑的高级句型；词语和句型的选用要包含作者的感情色彩和增强表达的气势；再次，运用关联词，使文字更加流畅。

【亮点说明】本篇范文结构紧凑，要点全面。文中运用了一些高级句法，如That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.这句话运用了表语从句。最后，文章注意了语句的衔接，如and；moreover等连接词起到很好的连接上下文的作用，使文章读起来自然流畅，朗朗上口。