第二节短文写作高中生在成长的过程中会碰到一些烦恼.你班就这一话题正积极筹备召开一次主题班会.请你依据下表进行必要的思考.并用英语准备一篇到会发言的材料.词数120左右. pains solutions 相貌.体形不美不必在意不被他人理解.朋友少加强沟通学习滞后.压力大 ? 零花钱不多 ? 注意:1．开头已写好.不记入词数. 2．语言通题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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第二节短文写作（满分25分）

高中生在成长的过程中会碰到一些烦恼。你班就这一话题正积极筹备召开一次主题班会。请你依据下表进行必要的思考，并用英语准备一篇到会发言的材料。词数120左右。

pains	solutions
相貌、体形不美	不必在意
不被他人理解，朋友少	加强沟通
学习滞后，压力大	?
零花钱不多	?

注意：1．开头已写好，不记入词数。

2．语言通顺，结构严谨，针对问号处给出自己的观点。

Good morning boys and girls,

We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely. ____________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________

That’s all, thank you .

【答案】

Good morning ,boys and girls,

We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely.

First, some of us are upset about their body styles and looks. It’s unnecessary and it’s not important at all. We needn’t care about it. It is one’s inner beauty that matters. Second, we sometimes seem to be misunderstood by our teachers, parents and classmates. Facing this, we can find a proper time to have a heart-to-heart talk with them, trying to remove the misunderstanding. Some of us have fewer friends. I think being open-minded and friendly will do you good. Third, we may fall behind others, which makes us stressed. Actually we can encourage ourselves to work efficiently, full of determination. Last, some of us don’t have much pocket money, so they feel unhappy. Isn’t it strange? So long as we have some, that’s enough. And we can learn to spend money wisely.

That’s all. Thank you.

【解析】略

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