Question

14．临近期末，高一同学即将面临着文理分科的选择．假定你是李华，你同学Lucy给你来信说到了她对文理科选择的困扰和焦虑．请你给她回信，安抚她的情绪并提出你的看法和建议．
注意：
1．词数100左右； 书信开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
2．内容要点：
①安抚她的情绪，劝她不必过于纠结；
②提出参考意见：认清自己兴趣和优势，不盲从他人；向高年级的同学请教 …
③提出看法：无论作何选择都要努力才能实现自己的期望．
3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
可能用到的词汇：焦虑anxiety；理性地 rationally；不辜负 live up to 盲目地 blindly
Dear Lucy，
I'm sorry to learn in your letter that you are upset about the coming choice of arts or science．Actually，many senior 1 students have the same anxiety and problem as you．But if we can deal with them rationally，there is nothing to worry about．（高分句型一）
When it comes to choosing between arts and science，the basic rule is to base our choice on our own interest and strengths．（高分句型二）Never follow others blindly!Besides，it may be helpful to seek opinions from senior 2 or 3 students，who have previous experience and lesson．（高分句型三）Finally，whichever we choose，please keep it in mind that only by working hard can we live up to our expectation and choice．（高分句型四）
I hope my ideas can help you．Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息临近期末，高一同学即将面临着文理分科的选择．假定你是李华，你同学Lucy给你来信说到了她对文理科选择的困扰和焦虑．请你给她回信，安抚她的情绪并提出你的看法和建议，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：①安抚她的情绪，劝她不必过于纠结；②提出参考意见：认清自己兴趣和优势，不盲从他人；向高年级的同学请教 …③提出看法：无论作何选择都要努力才能实现自己的期望．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Actually事实上；deal with应对，处理；When it comes to当谈到；Finally最后； keep it in mind that 牢记；live up to 不辜负；
But if we can deal with them rationally，there is nothing to worry about．（高分句型一）
When it comes to choosing between arts and science，the basic rule is to base our choice on our own interest and strengths．（高分句型二）
Besides，it may be helpful to seek opinions from senior 2 or 3 students，who have previous experience and lesson．（高分句型三）
Finally，whichever we choose，please keep it in mind that only by working hard can we live up to our expectation and choice．（高分句型四）

解答 Dear Lucy，
       I'm sorry to learn in your letter that you are upset about the coming choice of arts or science．Actually，many senior 1 students have the same anxiety and problem as you．But if we can deal with them rationally，there is nothing to worry about．（高分句型一）
      When it comes to choosing between arts and science，the basic rule is to base our choice on our own interest and strengths．（高分句型二）Never follow others blindly!Besides，it may be helpful to seek opinions from senior 2 or 3 students，who have previous experience and lesson．（高分句型三）Finally，whichever we choose，please keep it in mind that only by working hard can we live up to our expectation and choice．（高分句型四）
       I hope my ideas can help you．Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．