题目内容

有一英国网站正在征集以“My Teachers and Me”为主题的故事,请按以下要求写一篇发生在你与你的老师之间的故事。包括如下要点:

①叙述你老师对你影响深远的真实或虚构的故事;

②你遇到问题时,你的老师如何帮你解决;k.s.5.u

③你的老师对你产生了什么影响?

写作要求:以约120个词写一篇记叙文,并语言准确、规范、内容合适,篇章连贯。

Possible Version:

I wasn’t interested in studying because he believed no one cared about me until he met Mr.Thomson, one that I particularly liked and respected in my junior school years.

I was doing poorly in mathematics at that time.As a result, I was always feeling down.However, after each test, Mr.Thomson would always announce in class that I had made some progress.Of course, every time I would feel a little embarrassed, and pleased too.And I would make up my mind to work harder in future in order not to disappoint my teacher.So, after one year, I really made amazing progress in that subject.It was Mr.Thomson’s praise that helped me make it.His encouragement changed my life at school and will influence me all my life.I’ve come to realize that I can do anything well as long as I don’t lose heart.


解析:

本文为三个要点的记叙文,是一篇较为简单的文章,考生围绕要点写出发生在你和老师之间的事即可,主要叙述老师是如何帮助你的。

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第二节读写任务 (共1小题,满分25分)
阅读下面短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
It seemed no one cared about Steve, a twelve-year-old boy with alcoholic(酗酒) parents. In spite of his reading skills, he had been failing exams since first grade. Steve went unnoticed until Miss White.
  Miss White was a smiling, young, beautiful redhead, and Steve was in love! For the first time in his young life, he couldn’t take his eyes off his teacher; yet, still he failed. He never did his homework, and he was always in trouble with Miss White. His heart would break under her sharp words, and when he was punished for failing to turn in his homework, he felt just miserable! Still, he did not study.
  Until one day, Miss White talked to him, “Steve! Please! I care about you!”
Suddenly, Steve understood! Someone cared about him!
From that moment nothing was the same for Steve. Life at home remained the same, but life still changed. He discovered that not only could he learn, but he was good at it!
After high-school Steve joined the Navy, and he had a successful military career. During that time, he met the love of his life, he raised a family, and he graduated from a college. Later he became a professor in a nearby college
  You see, it’s simple, really. A change took place within the heart of one boy, all because of one teacher, who cared.
[写作内容]
有一英国网站正在征集以“My Teachers and Me”为主题的故事,请按以下要求写一篇发生在你与你的老师之间的故事:
1) 以约30个词概括短文的要点;
2) 然后以约120个词写一篇记叙文,并包括如下要点:
①叙述你老师对你影响深远的真实或虚构的故事;
②你遇到问题时,你的老师如何帮你解决;
③你的老师对你产生了什么影响?
[写作要求] 可以参照阅读材料的篇章结构,组织故事,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
[评分标准] 概括准确、语言规范、内容合适,篇章连贯。

第二节读写任务 (共1小题,满分25分)

阅读下面短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

It seemed no one cared about Steve, a twelve-year-old boy with alcoholic(酗酒) parents. In spite of his reading skills, he had been failing exams since first grade. Steve went unnoticed until Miss White.

  Miss White was a smiling, young, beautiful redhead, and Steve was in love! For the first time in his young life, he couldn’t take his eyes off his teacher; yet, still he failed. He never did his homework, and he was always in trouble with Miss White. His heart would break under her sharp words, and when he was punished for failing to turn in his homework, he felt just miserable! Still, he did not study.

  Until one day, Miss White talked to him, “Steve! Please! I care about you!”

Suddenly, Steve understood! Someone cared about him!

From that moment nothing was the same for Steve. Life at home remained the same, but life still changed. He discovered that not only could he learn, but he was good at it!

After high-school Steve joined the Navy, and he had a successful military career. During that time, he met the love of his life, he raised a family, and he graduated from a college. Later he became a professor in a nearby college

  You see, it’s simple, really. A change took place within the heart of one boy, all because of one teacher, who cared.

[写作内容]

有一英国网站正在征集以“My Teachers and Me”为主题的故事,请按以下要求写一篇发生在你与你的老师之间的故事:

1) 以约30个词概括短文的要点;

2) 然后以约120个词写一篇记叙文,并包括如下要点:

①叙述你老师对你影响深远的真实或虚构的故事;

②你遇到问题时,你的老师如何帮你解决;

③你的老师对你产生了什么影响?

[写作要求] 可以参照阅读材料的篇章结构,组织故事,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

[评分标准] 概括准确、语言规范、内容合适,篇章连贯。

 

第二节 读写任务 (共1小题,满分25分)

阅读下面短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

It seemed no one cared about Steve, a twelve-year-old boy with alcoholic(酗酒) parents. In spite of his reading skills, he had been failing exams since first grade. Steve went unnoticed until Miss White.

  Miss White was a smiling, young, beautiful redhead, and Steve was in love! For the first time in his young life, he couldn’t take his eyes off his teacher; yet, still he failed. He never did his homework, and he was always in trouble with Miss White. His heart would break under her sharp words, and when he was punished for failing to turn in his homework, he felt just miserable! Still, he did not study.

  Until one day, Miss White talked to him, “Steve! Please! I care about you!”

Suddenly, Steve understood! Someone cared about him!

From that moment nothing was the same for Steve. Life at home remained the same, but life still changed. He discovered that not only could he learn, but he was good at it!

After high-school Steve joined the Navy, and he had a successful military career. During that time, he met the love of his life, he raised a family, and he graduated from a college. Later he became a professor in a nearby college

  You see, it’s simple, really. A change took place within the heart of one boy, all because of one teacher, who cared.

[写作内容]

    有一英国网站正在征集以“My Teachers and Me”为主题的故事,请按以下要求写一篇发生在你与你的老师之间的故事:

1) 以约30个词概括短文的要点;

2) 然后以约120个词写一篇记叙文,并包括如下要点:

①叙述你老师对你影响深远的真实或虚构的故事;

②你遇到问题时,你的老师如何帮你解决;

③你的老师对你产生了什么影响?

[写作要求]  可以参照阅读材料的篇章结构,组织故事,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

[评分标准]  概括准确、语言规范、内容合适,篇章连贯。

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