Question

【题目】假定你是李华。在你生日到来之际你收到了美国朋友彼得寄来的礼物——一本畅销的英文小说。请给他回信，要点如下：

1.小说收到；2.回赠一份小礼物；3.小礼物的意义；4.邀请来华。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I’m glad to receive the novel. Thank you for such a lovely birthday gift as I have been expecting it for a long time. This novel gives me some insights into American society and daily life.

I know you’re interested in Chinese festivals, and therefore I have chosen an album of paper cutting for you. Paper cutting is a unique form of Chinese cultural relics, which is often used as a decoration for a joyous atmosphere. I hope it will bring happiness and luck to your family as it always does in China.

Best wishes. Expecting you to come to China and experience the rich culture in person.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封回信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封回信；在你生日到来之际你收到了美国朋友彼得寄来的礼物一本畅销的英文小说，用英语给他写一封回信，告诉他小说收到了，同时回赠一份小礼物，并解释礼物的意义和邀请他来中国；本文时态应主要为一般现在时和一般将来时，人称主要使用第一人称。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：receive（收到），novel（小说）birthday gift（生日礼物），insight（见识），paper cutting（剪纸），Chinese cultural relics（中国文化遗产）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮点说明】

本篇范文结构合理，行文流畅。作者在范文中使用了较多复合句，原因状语从句：Thank you for such a lovely birthday gift as I have been expecting it for a long time.；定语从句：Paper cutting is a unique form of Chinese cultural relics, which is often used as a decoration for a joyous atmosphere.；方式状语从句：I hope it will bring happiness and luck to your family as it always does in China.。这些体现了作者较高的语言运用能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。