Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last Monday, my classmate and I saw some people gathering in our way to school. In order to see what was happening, so we got close enough and found an old woman lie on the ground. The people around her just stand there, watching and chatting. We were worried about her and decided to take her to the hospital immediate. It turned out that she lost her balance but fell. She had to stay in hospital, so we called her family. Soon his son came and thanked us by offering us money. We refused money and left. Hurried to school, we found we were late. To out delight though, our teacher praised us for that we had done and we felt very proud.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】in → on

【2】去掉so

【3】lie → lying

【4】stand → stood

【5】immediate →immediately

【6】but→ and

【7】his→ her

【8】money 前面加the/his

【9】Hurried→Hurrying

【10】that → what

【解析】

试题分析：本文讲述的是我和同学一起去学校的路上，碰到一个老人躺在路上，而围观的人只是观望着讨论着没有上前帮助老人。我和同学担心这位老人，把老人送去了医院并通知了其家人。家人非常感谢，以钱酬谢，我们拒绝了好意。老师表扬了我们尽管我们迟到了。

【1】 in → on考察介词。on one’s way to sp.固定搭配，意思是在某人去某地的路上。故把in改成on。

【2】去掉so考察连词。In order to不能和so连用。相当于because和so不能连用一样。故去掉so。

【3】lie → lying考察非谓语动词。find sb. dong sth.固定搭配表示发现某人正在做某事。故把lie改成lying。

【4】stand → stood考察时态。文本所讲述的事情发生在last Monday，所以动词用过去时。故把stand改成stood。

【5】immediate →immediately考察副词。immediately修饰动词take。故把immediate改成immediately。

【6】but→ and考察连词。fell和lost her balance属于并列关系，不存在转折。故把but改成and。

【7】his→ her考察物主代词。我们帮助的人是个old woman。所以她的儿子应该表示成her son。故把his改成her。

【8】money 前面加the/his考察定冠词或物主代词。money是名词前面应该加定冠词the，或者加his，表示是她儿子的钱。故在money前面加the/his。

【9】Hurried→Hurrying考察非谓语动词。hurry 和我们之间是主动关系。故把hurried改成hurrying。

【10】that → what考察疑问词。what we had done表示我们做过的事。故把that改成what。