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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限1词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. He didn't want share things with other people. For an example，when he bought a chocolate cake，he put them in a secret place. Then he eats it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy. That is，a game of tennis making him very busy. He didn't care if something he did made people angrily. For instance，on a cold night he played strong and loudly music till 4 o'clock in the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps Grandma with housework，Mom with cooking and his classmates with their lessons.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】加to

【2】去掉an

【3】them→it

【4】eats →ate

【5】other →others

【6】is →was

【7】making→ made

【8】angrily→ angry

【9】loudly →loud

【10】difference →different

【解析】

试题分析:本文主要讲了我的表哥Tom的转变过程。小时候他是一个自私自利的人，偷偷把巧克力藏起来自己吃，不愿意帮助他人，不在乎他人感受。但是现在他变得不同了，帮助奶奶做家务、妈妈做饭。

【1】加to 考查want用法。want to do sth,想做某事。He didn't want to share things with other people.他不喜欢和其他的人分享，故加上to。

【2】去掉an 考查固定搭配。For example举例子，不用冠词，故去掉an。

【3】them→it 考查代词。when he bought a chocolate cake，he put it in a secret place.他买了巧克力蛋糕后，会把它放在秘密的地方。此处it代指前面a chocolate cake，是单数名词，不用them，改为it。

【4】eats →ate 考查一般过去时。讲述我的表哥过去的事情，用一般过去时，故改为ate。

【5】other →others 考查代名词。He never helped others.他从不帮助他人。Others指的是除他以外的所有人，是泛指概念，故改为others。

【6】is →was 考查一般过去时。He said he was busy他说他很忙。叙述的是白哦个过去的事情，前面用的是said，故改为was。

【7】making→ made 考查谓语动词。That is，a game of tennis made him very busy.换言之，网球使他非常的忙碌。主语是a game of tennis，时态是一般过去时，故改为made。

【8】angrily→ angry 考查形容词。made people angry使某人很生气，用形容词，故改为angry。

【9】loudly →loud 考查形容词。on a cold night he played strong and loudly music在晚上他把音乐声音放的很大。music是名词，形容词修饰名词，故改为loud。

【10】difference →different 考查形容词。But he is difference now.但是他现在大不一样了，be different不一样，故改为different。