Question

9．央视知名记者柴静自费制作的关于环境污染的纪录片《穹顶之下》引起强烈反响．假如你是李华，请用英语给21世纪英文报写一封信，表达你的观点．
内容包括：
1．阐述柴静所做的事对我们生活的影响；
2．面临环境污染我们能做些什么．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear editor，
After watching the movie Under the Dome，I was deeply moved by what Chai Jing did．
         ．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文要求考生对纪录片《穹顶之下》做出评论，题中已经给出了要点内容，考生首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样才可以更好的驾驭．同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，
 重要短语：
 be worthy of，值得；approve of 支持；For instance，例如；
高分句子：
1．I'm strongly convinced that an increasing number of Chinese have realized the great harm that pollution has done and will do what they can to improve our environment．本句为that引导的宾语从句，从句中又包含了what引导的主语从句，很见考生功底．
2．Only when we make every effort to reduce pollution can we feel ease under the dome，本句为重要句式，only位于从句句首时，主句要进行倒装，意为只有…才…

解答 Dear editor，
After watching the movie Under the Dome，I was deeply moved by what Chai Jing did．The movie has aroused the public's environmental awareness and is worthy of admiration（叙述影响）．
Thanks to the movie，I'm strongly convinced that an increasing number of Chinese have realized the great harm that pollution has done and will do what they can to improve our environment（高分句型）．
I approve of the view that everyone is supposed to take effective measures to protect our environment from being polluted．For instance，we can choose green transport like walking and bicycling．Obviously，the government should strengthen the management of pollutant emission．Only when we make every effort to reduce pollution can we feel ease under the dome（高分句型）．We do need the immediate change（给出建议）．
Best wishes!
 
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 提纲式作文要求考生根据给出的题目和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开论述，表达提纲的主旨．它的优点是提纲既体现了文章的层次，又规定了各段大体的内容，为考生提供了一条思路，稍加思索、计划、整理就可成文．但缺点是如果审题不当，反而容易丢分．