Question

随着经济的发展，城市交通问题越来越严重。请根据下列提示，写一篇短文，并谈谈自己的看法。

现状：1. 高峰期交通堵塞，浪费时间；

2. 难找到停车的地方，空气质量差。

解决方式：

1. 多建地下停车场，大力发展公共交通；

2. 增强环保意识，使用替代能源。

注意：1. 文章必须包括主要内容，过渡自然。  2. 参考词汇：awareness

3. 词数120左右

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

With the development of Chinese economy, the traffic problem in cities is becoming more and more serious.

Firstly, it is very common for people to get stuck in the traffic jam during the rush hour, which is a great waste of time. Also, it is difficult to find a parking place, especially in the center of a city. Furthermore, the air has been seriously polluted because of too many cars.

Luckily, people have come up with some good ideas. More underground parking lots should be built, and the public transport system is to be improved. Meanwhile, we should improve people’s awareness of protecting the environment and use as many alternative energy resources as possible.

In my opinion, the planet earth is not just ours but also the future generations’. I would ride a bicycle rather than drive a car.

【解析】

试题分析：英语写作是一种创作性的学习过程。启动知识信息储存，构思立意，谋篇布局，遣词造句，对语言表达的正确性和准确性、思维的逻辑性和文章的条理性都比口语要求更高。先审题，弄清写作要求，审题是写好作文的前提，理清思路，确定体裁、框架结构和内容。提醒考生注意时态及语态的使用。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如With the development of Chinese economy, come up with, improve people’s awareness of protecting the environment还运用了which引导的定语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：Firstly，Meanwhile， Also, Furthermore, In my opinion等等。

考点：提纲作文。