题目内容
17.随着经济的迅速发展,越来越多的中国人选择出境旅游.但是,部分中国游客在国外的一些不文明行为有损中国的形象.请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文,并就此问题谈谈你的看法和建议,要点如下:1.境外旅游的不文明行为:乱扔垃圾;乱涂乱画.
2.不文明行为的影响:破坏旅游资源;有损国家形象.
3.你的建议:至少两点
参考词汇:乱扔垃圾 litter(v.) 乱涂乱画 scribble (v.) 不文明的uncivilized(adj.) 形象image(n.)
注意:1.对所有要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译.
2.词数100左右.开头已经写好,不计入总词数.
3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名.
With the development of economy,an increasing number of Chinese people travel abroad as a way of relaxation.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息针对部分中国游客在国外的一些不文明行为有损中国的形象,用英语写一篇短文,并就此问题谈谈你的看法和建议,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:境外旅游的不文明行为:乱扔垃圾;乱涂乱画;不文明行为的影响:破坏旅游资源;有损国家形象.你的建议:至少两点 2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:However然而;and so on等等;Undoubtedly毫无疑问;do harm to对…有害;Meanwhile同时;
Undoubtedly,uncivilized behavior has left a negative impression on foreigners and it may do harm to tourism resources and the image of our country.(高分句型一)
From where I stand,it is high time we took some measures to educate some of our tourists to behave themselves and at the same time we should do our part to promote our own tourism.(高分句型二)
Only in these ways can we maintain the harmony and development of the world.(高分句型三)句中使用了only+状语的主句半倒装
解答 With the development of economy,an increasing number of Chinese people travel abroad as a way of relaxation.Travelling abroad has many advantages.However,some of them behave badly in other countries,such as littering,scribbling and so on.
Undoubtedly,uncivilized behavior has left a negative impression on foreigners and it may do harm to tourism resources and the image of our country.(高分句型一)Meanwhile,people from other countries are likely to lose trust in us.
From where I stand,it is high time we took some measures to educate some of our tourists to behave themselves and at the same time we should do our part to promote our own tourism.(高分句型二)Only in these ways can we maintain the harmony and development of the world.(高分句型三)
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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--No one was equal ______ her ______ skills and experience.( )
A. | to; on | B. | with; on | C. | with; in | D. | to; in |
-Sure.________( )
A. | Rome was not built in a day. | |
B. | A bird in the hand is worth two in the bush. | |
C. | Strike while the iron is hot. | |
D. | Don't count your chickens before they are hatched. |