题目内容
【题目】当今,绿色生活方式已被人们广泛接受,并体现在生活的各个方面。某英语报社现正在中学生中开展
以“Green life at home”为主题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇文章投稿。内容要点如下:
1.介绍你在家的具体做法(如节能节水、环保购物等):
2.向全社会提出绿色生活倡议。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文章开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
Green life style is becoming increasingly popular nowadays as it can help to reduce pollution and save energy.
【答案】
Green life style is becoming increasingly popular nowadays as it can help to reduce pollution and save energy. It is easy to adopt in our daily life and here I’d like to hsare my practice at home.
To save water, I often try to reuse it for watering flowers after washing hands or vegetables and seldom do I leave the tap water running when showering or washing. Also,when it is necessary to use the air conditioner,I usually set it to a proper temperature so that I can useless electricity and save money as will. Besides, I always keep in mind that I have all the light switched off before leaving a room. What makes me most proud is that I have a cloth shopping bad made by myself for my regular shopping.
I’m fully convinced that as long as everyone sticks to the three R principles---Reduce, Reduce and Recyle, we’ll be moving a step closer to a green life day by day.
【解析】
试题分析:考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常用的短语keep in mind记住;switch off关掉;stick to坚持;seldom do I leave the tap water running when showering or washing这个句子运用否定词放在句首用部分倒装;What makes me most proud is that I have a cloth shopping bad made by myself for my regular shopping.这个句子what引导主语从句,that引导表语从句;