题目内容
19.假设你叫严志胜,你的老同学吴琛半年前去加拿大留学,你们常通过e-mail互通情况,最近他来信介绍他在那里的情况,并询问你和你们班的同学们.请你根据以下他的来信以及上述介绍,写一封100词左右的回复邮件.Hi,Yan Zhisheng,
I have just spent my term 1in this semester at Unionville High School.I have to say this is a great school.I have joined the Match Club of the school and taken part in some math competitions.This is good for me to apply for the University of Waterloo,which is my dream school.
By they way,I've got my mid-term scores.I have 4courses,and the scores are 94,91,84and 79.I am not satisfied with my score in ESLD scourse,so I will try my best to work harder in term 2.
How are you getting along?How is Class 0806?Please write back.
I sincerely wish you the best of luck in everything!
Wu Chen
要点:1.对他在如此短时间取得的成绩表示祝贺;
2.表达你对他ESLD课程成绩提高的信心;
3.简要介绍自己和全班的情况.
注意:1.可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译;
2.词数100左右.开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数.
Hi,Wu Chen,
Nice to read your e-mail today.Congratulations on your good mid-term scores!You've been in Canada…
Best wishes!
Yan Zhisheng.
分析 (高分句型一) With your efforts,you will certainly improve your ESLD course and do excellently in it.
本句用with 加efforts,表达了对他ESLD课程成绩提高的信心,句子里的副词certainly improve加强语气;
(高分句型二)Our first class starts at 7:40 and some of us,including me,even stay at school studying until 10:30 in the evening.
including 此处是介词,意思是包括,even甚至用来加强语气,强调我们晚上直到10:30才休息.
注意:在回信时,因为是介绍我目前的情况,所以时态需用一般现在时;
使用一些过渡词,如:With your efforts,And,even等.
短语如:Congratulations on;I'm happy that;do excellently;have more communications with.
解答 One possible version
Hi,Wu Chen,
It's nice to read your e-mail today.(表示祝贺)Congratulations on your good mid-term scores!You've been in Canada for only half a year and already done so well.I'm happy that you have achieved so much in such a short time.
(高分句型一) With your efforts,you will certainly improve your ESLD course and do excellently in it.(表达对他的信心)And I'm sure you will get to know more about Canadian culture and people,and now as a member of the Math Club,you will have more communications with other students there.
(介绍自己班级情况)We students of Class 0806 are really busy preparing ourselves for the college entrance exams in June with the help of our teachers (高分句型二)Our first class starts at 7:40 and some of us,including me,even stay at school studying until 10:30 in the evening.
Best wishes!
Yan Zhisheng
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