题目内容
3．Dear Sir，I'm glad to learn that part-time assistants were wanted in your studio and I'd like to have a try．
I'm a student who is graduated from high school soon．Before attending the college，I'll have a long holiday and I'm determined to make the best of them．Since childhood，I have developed a strong interest in storytelling and watching films．My teacher thinks high of my performance in the language class，when I have also acquired a good knowledge of American movie industry．Except that，I am monitor of my class and thus have gained many experience in management．
I will undertake full responsibility and spare no effort to do my share of work．I am fully convinced that through communication with the staffs，I can get some valuable work experience as well as develop my social skills．
I'm looking forward to receiving your reply soon．Thank you for your consider．
Yours，
Li Hua．
分析 本文主要介绍作者即将高中毕业，迎来一个漫长的假期，想找份兼职工作．因他在语言方面有天赋，希望通过这份工作来增长自己的工作经验和社会技能．
解答 Dear Sir，
I'm glad to learn that part-time assistants were wanted in your studio and I'd like to have a try．
I'm a student who is graduated from high school soon．Before attending the college，I'll have a long holiday and I'm determined to make the best of them．Since childhood，I have developed a strong interest in storytelling and watching films．My teacher thinks high of my performance in the language class，when I have also acquired a good knowledge of American movie industry．Except that，I am monitor of my class and thus have gained many experience in management．
I will undertake full responsibility and spare no effort to do my share of work．I am fully convinced that through communication with the staffs，I can get some valuable work experience as well as develop my social skills．
I'm looking forward to receiving your reply soon．Thank you for your consider．
详解：
1．were改为are 考查动词时态．叙述当前事情应用一般现在时，根据主语part-time assistants是复数形式，谓语动词应用复数形式are．
2．graduated改为graduating 考查动词语态．graduate意为"毕业"，是不及物动词，此处现在进行时表一般将来时，用主动语态．
3．去掉the 考查词语用法．attend college意为"上大学"，不加定冠词．
4．them改为it 考查代词．此处it代指holiday．
5．high改为highly 考查副词．thing highly of意为"对…高度评价"，是固定搭配．
6．when改为where 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词the language class表示地点，在从句中作地点状语，用关系副词where．
7．Except改为Besides 考查介词．besides"除了…之外（还有）"；except"除了"．由语境可知，此处应用Besides．
8．many改为much 考查形容词．修饰不可数名词experience，应用much，many修饰复数名词．
9．staffs改为staff 考查名词．staff意为"员工"，是集合名词，没有复数形式．
10．consider改为consideration 考查名词．for是介词，后接名词，动词consider的名词是consideration．
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．
