Question

【题目】假设你叫李华，现是武汉大学的一名新生。请你根据以下提示，给你中学的英语老师李老师写一封感谢信，表达对他的爱戴和尊敬。词数100左右。

提示：

1．对英语李老师教学的评价。

2．回顾在校时你的心情。

3．对老师的理解和祝愿。

信的开头已经写好，但不计入总词数。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr Li,

I’m very excited to write to express my thanks to you. I am now a freshman of Wuhan University, which I have been dreaming about. Mr Li, I still remember the days when you taught me English. My English has been improved greatly because of your creative work. However, at one time, the pressure of examinations, too much homework and the high expectations made me depressed. I was tired of the warning that if I didn’t do my best, I wouldn’t have the chance to go to college. Thanks for your encouragement; if not, I wouldn’t have realized my dream. And now I really understand you. I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges. Are you still so busy?How I miss you!

Hoping to hear from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇书信类作文，假设你叫李华，现是武汉大学的一名新生。根据题目所给提示，给你中学的英语老师李老师写一封感谢信，表达对他的爱戴和尊敬，所以要用第一人称来写。需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数120左右，不要太多也不要太少。

亮点句子：

Mr Li, I still remember the days when you taught me English.when引导定语从句修饰先行词the days。

Thanks for your encouragement; if not, I wouldn’t have realized my dream.if not 是省略形式的虚拟语气。