题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,一直热心于公益活动。你在校园看到学生会招聘志愿者的海报,打算参加。请根据海报上的信息,用英语写一封申请信
注意: 1. 词数120左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
Dear Miss Liu,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Miss Liu,
I am a student from Class 2 Senior 3. The moment i saw your poster for recruiting volunteers,I know i should try my luck. I am always a strong advocator for environmental protection. Besides, my hometown is by Chaohu Lake, which not only provides abundant resources but also is a popular tourist attraction.
In terms of my character, i am happy to tell you that i am an outgoing and committed person with a good team work spirit. I have learned a lot from participating in some volunteer programs in the past,such as cutting hair for empty nesters and collecting rubbish on the river at weekends. I am very confident that my involvement in this project will make it very different.
Look forward to hearing from you soon.
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于说明文,根据提示信息和海报说明自己的具体情况。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照提示顺序进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如The moment i saw your poster for recruiting volunteers. 是时间状语从句。 which not only provides abundant resources but also is a popular tourist attraction.是非限制性定语从句,还有倒装句behind the community is a beautiful park。此外,文章还使用了大量短语 In terms of , outgoing and committed , make it very different, In terms of等。副词besides的使用使文章内容更具有层次感,也使语言更加连贯。