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4．假设你是李华，自己一人远离家人在二中读书．因为感觉学习压力很大，学校的饭菜又不太好吃有点烦躁，甚至和同桌吵架了．所以想到通过写信的方式和妈妈诉诉苦，并且表达对家人的思念之情．
Dear Mum，
I have studied in No.2middle school for almost a year．
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Answer 1

分析 这是一篇关于高中生在校生活苦恼的作文．根据题目要求可知一第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一表示思念；二在校生活的苦恼；三表示自己的决心．
高分句型：
1．So difficult are the subjects  that I feel very stressed．句子里So difficult 位于句首，are the subjects  用倒装；so…that表示"如此以至于"．
所学的科目是那么难，以至于我感觉学习压力很大．
2．What's more，I'm always starved since the food in school's cafeteria doesn't agree with my taste，in which case I don't have ample energy to concentrate．句子里since引导原因状语从句； agree with 表示"符合"；which引导非限制性定语从句，代指主句．
再有，因为学校食堂的饭菜不合我的口味，所以我常常挨饿，在这种情况下，我就不能集中精力上课．

解答 Dear Mum，
   I have studied in No.2 middle school for almost a year and I miss you very much．（表示思念）
   First，I want to talk about my recent study condition．So difficult are the subjects  that I feel very stressed．【高分句型一】Besides，as I'm not familiar with the teachers here，I don't dare to ask questions．What's more，I'm always starved since the food in school's cafeteria doesn't agree with my taste，in which case I don't have ample energy to concentrate．【高分句型二】Feeling tired and frustrated，I have got a bad temper and even quarreled with my classmate yesterday．（在校生活的苦恼）
   I'm in such a great mess and lonely．But don't worry about me．I believe I can deal with all of these and will certainly grow into a successful man．（表示自己的决心）
                                                                                                                                          Yours
                                                                                                                                          LiHua

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