四.写作第一节短文改错(共10小题,每小题1分.满分10分) 以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误.请找出.并按下列情况改正: 此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.在该行右边横线上写出该词.并也用斜线划掉. 此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).在该行右边横线上写出该加的词. 此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线.在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词. 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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四、写作（共两节，满分35分）

第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：

此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：请在答题卡上作答。

It is Sunday.Li Ming is busy with working on his lessons 1._________

in the afternoon at home. During a break, he relaxes in the 2. _________

Window，expecting enjoy the sunshine. Yet the heavy 3. _________

traffic seems to remind him of something.Like a Senior 3 4. _________

student,facing with the college entrance exams, he feels time is 5. _________

more or less limited for him.He thinks he must careful plan 6. _________

anything in order to solve the remaining problems with 7. _________

his lessons but prepare for the coming exams.Meanwhile, 8. _________

he has to take good care of him.Li Ming is determined 9. _________

to try his best so that he would go to a good university. 10. _________

【答案】

去掉with或with改为in

第二个 in改为by

enjoy前加to

Like改为As

faced改为facing或去掉with

careful改为carefully

anything改为everything

but改为 and

him改为himself

would改为will

【解析】

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10初语言错误，每句中最多有两处。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符合(^)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划—横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.至允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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