Question

【题目】假设暑假期间你父母带你去北京旅游。请你用英语写一篇短文描述你的见闻和感想，要点如下：

1. 北京历史悠久且充满现代气息，人民友好；

2. 参观了名胜古迹，品尝了当地小吃。

3. 外国人很多，是国际化城市；

4. 你的感想。

注意：1．100个词左右。 2．不要逐字翻译成英文。

Answer 1

【答案】

During the summer vacation, my parents and I made a short trip to our capital---Beijing. It is a modern city with a long history. People there are friendly. We visited many places of interest such as the Great Wall and Bird’s Nest. We tried different kinds of local food too. I saw many foreigners working or traveling around Beijing. It is becoming an international city. It is attracting people from all over the world. I enjoyed my trip very much. In addition, I am happy to see our country is getting stronger and more developed. I am proud to be Chinese.

【解析】

试题分析：假设暑假期间你父母带你去北京旅游。请你用英语写一篇短文描述你的见闻和感想，要点如下：1. 北京历史悠久且充满现代气息，人民友好；2. 参观了名胜古迹，品尝了当地小吃。3. 外国人很多，是国际化城市；4. 你的感。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1．100个词左右。2．不要逐字翻译成英文。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇英语短文，描写了见闻和感想。内容齐全，结构严谨，语言简练，有自己的感想。I am happy to see our country is getting stronger and more developed.宾语从句和比较级完美结合；另外，such as，In addition, am proud to be的运用为文章增色添彩。