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假定你是李华,在一个英文网络论坛上,你看到一个名叫Grown-up的中学生发帖(post)寻求帮助,请根据帖子的内容、写作要点和要求回帖。

Grown-up        Post at 20-05-2013  18:30                             1#

               Hi, everyone,

  I’m a Senior Grade Three student, and I am suffering from

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mental pressure these days, what should I do? 

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写作要点:

1. 告诉Grown-up心理压力不可避免;     2. 告诉Grown-up心里压力的危害; 

3. 建议Grown-up应正确面对心理压力;    4. 介绍你面对心里压力时所采取的措施。

注意:

1. 词数100左右。

2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

3. 文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

 

【答案】

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Possible version:

Hi, Grown-up,                                                                                                                                   

It’s a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life. In my opinion, everyone will meet some mental pressure in their life. But if it lasts a long time, it may do harm to our body.

Whenever I meet pressure, I try to keep calm and think how to overcome it. Sometimes it is very effective. When I’m stressed out, I listen to music or do some sports. After that, I often find that my moods become much better. If I can’t overcome it, I will turn to my parents, teachers or good friends.

To sum up, we should face pressure bravely and overcome it actively. 

Hope my ideas will work.

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇提纲类作文,首先要认真阅读题目。假定你是李华,在一个英文网络论坛上,你看到一个名叫Grown-up的中学生发帖(post)寻求帮助,请根据帖子的内容、写作要点和要求回帖。写作要点:

1. 告诉Grown-up心理压力不可避免;2. 告诉Grown-up心里压力的危害;3. 建议Grown-up应正确面对心理压力;4. 介绍你面对心里压力时所采取的措施,应该用第一人称来写。需要写的内容已经给出,但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。注意字数,词数100左右,不能太多,也不能太少。

考点:提纲类作文

点评:本文属于提纲类作文,动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

 

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