Question

【题目】一家英国网站专门为外国留学生提供住宿家庭的信息，假如你是李华，打算明年去英国留学，因此你给他们发一封电子邮件，说明你的租房要求：

1. 提供单独的房间; 2. 房子的地点; 3. 免费提供生活用品（洗衣机等）; 4. 每月房租。

请根据以上内容写一篇100词左右的电子邮件，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总字数，可适当增加细节。参考词汇： 住宿家庭 host family

Dear Sir/Madam:

I am going to study in the UK next year.

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Look forward to your early reply.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

I am going to study in the UK next year.

I learn from our website that you can provide accommodation for overseas students, so I am writing to look for a host family. Here are my requirements.

First, I’d like to have my own room, which is comfortable for me to stay in. Second, the flat should not be far away from the center of the city, where the traffic is convenient for me to go around. Third, I’d appreciate it if the host family can provide a washing machine and some cookers for free so that I can wash my clothes and cook my meals. Besides, the monthly rent should be no more than 100 pounds.

Look forward to your early reply.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇以李华的身份向一家英国网站写的信，因为这家网站专门为外国留学生提供住宿家庭的信息所以本文使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态要点如下：1．点明书信目的；2．说明自己的要求。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。要注意书写，认真查验是否有漏写情况等。

文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如provide for；for free；no more than；look forward to等；还运用句型First, I’d like to have my own room, which is comfortable for me to stay in.这句话运用了定语从句；Second, the flat should not be far away from the center of the city, where the traffic is convenient for me to go around.这句话运用了非限定性定语从句；Third, I’d appreciate it if the host family can provide a washing machine and some cookers for free so that I can wash my clothes and cook my meals.这句话运用了宾语从句等。并注意了句子的衔接如so，first，second，third，besides等等。