题目内容
18.Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.为了激发同学们读书的热情,你校将在2017年4月23日"世界读书日"(the World Book and Copyright Day) 当天举行一个读书节活动,近日学校正向全体学生征询活动方案.假定你是该校学生李华,请你给校长写一封信,推荐你的方案.你的信须包括以下内容:
1.描述你想推荐的活动方案,如:活动主题、时间…;
2.简单阐述你提出此方案的理由.
Dear headmaster,
I am writing to invite you to participate in our campus book fair,which will be held on 23rd April,2017-the World Book and Copyright Day.
Aimed to arouse the enthusiasm for reading,this activity is designed to provide a platform where the students can buy or exchange books and share their reading experience. On that day,the fair will exhibit books of hundreds of types on diverse topics,motivating us to further develop our reading habits and help to broaden our horizons.In addition,most books will be sold at a lower price than what the book stores offer.Hopefully,you can give us the chance to hold the activity.
Please let me know if you can permit us to do this and we look forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本文属于提纲作文,动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.
亮点句型一:Aimed to arouse the enthusiasm for reading,this activity is designed to provide a platform where the students can buy or exchange books and share their reading experience.为了激发学生的阅读热情,本次活动的目的是提供一个平台,让学生可以购买或交换书籍和分享他们的阅读体验.本句中Aimed to arouse the enthusiasm for reading是非谓语动词在句中做状语.where the students can buy or exchange books and share their reading experience.是一个定语从句,先行词为platform,在从句中做状语.
亮点句型二:On that day,the fair will exhibit books of hundreds of types on diverse topics,motivating us to further develop our reading habits and help to broaden our horizons.在那一天,博览会将展出数百种类型的书籍在不同的主题,激励我们进一步发展我们的阅读习惯,并有助于扩大我们的视野.本句中 motivating us to further develop our reading habits and help to broaden our horizons是现在分词在句中做结果状语.
解答 Dear headmaster,
I am writing to invite you to participate in our campus book fair,which will be held on 23rd April,2017-the World Book and Copyright Day.
Aimed to arouse the enthusiasm for reading,this activity is designed to provide a platform where the students can buy or exchange books and share their reading experience.(亮点句型一) On that day,the fair will exhibit books of hundreds of types on diverse topics,motivating us to further develop our reading habits and help to broaden our horizons.(亮点句型二)In addition,most books will be sold at a lower price than what the book stores offer.Hopefully,you can give us the chance to hold the activity.
Please let me know if you can permit us to do this and we look forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
A. | Having read | B. | While reading | C. | If reading | D. | When you read |
A. | can we improve | B. | we improve | C. | improve we | D. | we can improve |