Question

【题目】假设你是新华中学的学生李华，在互联网上看到一个名为Peter的美国高中生所登出的一则征友信息，他希望结识一位中国朋友。请你用英语给Peter写一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：

1.得知其愿望，并愿意交友；

2.可以带他参观北京，学习汉语，品尝中国美食。

注意：1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

I am Li Hua, a Chinese student studying in Xinhua Middle School. _________________________________

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I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I am Li Hua, a Chinese student studying in Xinhua Middle School. I’ve learned from the Internet that you want to make friends with a Chinese student. I’m so delighted that you show great interest in China and I’d like very much to be your friend.

I am 17 years old and fond of traveling and making friends. As an outgoing young man, I like traveling with my friends and learn more about other people and their hometown. I’m also interested in your life in America. So I’m sure we’ll have a lot to share with each other.

I will try my best to introduce you Chinese culture. If you have a chance to come to China. I’ll show you around Beijing, teach you some Chinese and treat you to delicious Chinese food.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，要求假设你是新华中学的学生李华，在互联网上看到一个名为Peter的美国高中生所登出的一则征友信息，他希望结识一位中国朋友。请你用英语给Peter写一封电子邮件。要注意电子邮件的格式和特殊用词。考虑得知其愿望，并愿意交友用一般现在时来写；可以带他参观北京，学习汉语，品尝中国美食，用一般将来时来写。要点：1.得知其愿望，并愿意交友；2.可以带他参观北京，学习汉语，品尝中国美食。

这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: make friends with与某人……交朋友，share with分享。还使用了宾语从句I’ve learned from the Internet that you want to make friends with a Chinese student.和宾语从句So I’m sure we’ll have a lot to share with each other.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。