题目内容

10．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
       2．只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分．
Last month we took a trip to Dalian because of my brother was getting married．When mom told me the news，she found that I wasn't exciting．So the next words out of her mouth was，"Besides go to the wedding，we would also be going to the Wild Animal Park"，I thought the wedding was boring，so it turned out to be very interesting．There was so many food and their choice in music was pleasant．I enjoy myself there and I really didn't want to leave．Back home that night I wrote thank-you note to my brother for the great time we have at her wedding．

分析 本文讲述了作者参加哥哥婚礼的过程．上个月我们去大连参加哥哥的婚礼，妈妈看我不感兴趣，就说我们还会去野生动物园．我本认为婚礼很无聊，结果证明婚礼很有趣，食物美味，音乐优美，我都不想要离开了．回来后我给哥哥写了感谢信．

解答 Last month we took a trip to Dalian because of my brother was getting married．When mom told me the news，she found that I wasn't exciting．So the next words out of her mouth was，"Besides go to the wedding，we would also be going to the Wild Animal Park"，I thought the wedding was boring，so it turned out to be very interesting．There was so many food and their choice in music was pleasant．I enjoy myself there and I really did't want to leave．Back home that night I wrote thank-you note to my brother for the great time we have at her wedding．
解析：
1、去掉of．引导从句my brother was getting married用连词 because．
2、exciting-excited．考查单词辨析．修饰主语I用excited，表示"兴奋的"．
3、was-were．考查主谓一致关系．和主语 the next words呼应用were．
4、go-going．考查非谓语动词．介词Besides的宾语用动名词doing，所以用going．
5、be going-go．考查谓语动词．情态动词would用动词原形，所以用would go．
6、so-but．考查连词．I thought the wedding was boring表示"我本认为婚礼很无聊"，it turned out to be very interesting表示"结果证明婚礼很有趣"，两句之间是转折关系，所以用but连接．
7、many-much．考查不可数名词的修饰词．修饰不可数名词food用much．
8、enjoy-enjoyed．考查谓语动词的时态．本文讲述的是过去的事，所以谓语动词用过去式enjoyed．
9、have-had．考查谓语动词的时态．本文讲述的是过去的事，所以谓语动词用过去式had．
10、her-his．考查代词．和my brother 呼应用his．

点评 考查短文改错．
修饰不可数名词的常用修饰语有this，that，little，a little，a bit of，much，a great deal of，a large amount of 等：
I have little time to do it．我没什么时间来做此事．
He didn't give me much money．他没给我很多钱．
A great deal of money is spent on research．研究工作上花了许多钱．

练习册系列答案
相关题目
20．What do you learn from the conversation？
A．The man is seldom at home during the daytime，
B．The man left earlier today to send a letter．
C．The man always leaves earlier than four o'clock．
1．How is the man going home？
A．By car．   B．On foot．   C．By bus．
18．What will Celia do？
A．Play basketball．B．Watch a game．C．Find a player．
5．A young man wanted （56）to learn （learn） something from an expert on stones，but the expert feared that the young man （57）didn't have （have） patience．The young man asked again and    again （58）for a chance．Finally the expert told him，"Be here tomorrow．"
    That morning the expert put （59）a jade stone（玉石） in the young man's hand and told him to hold it．The young man sat （60）quietly（quiet） and waited．The following morning the young man （61）was told（tell） to do the same thing as well as the third，fourth，and fifth day．On the sixth day，he held the jade stone （62）given （give） by the expert，thinking that he could no longer stand the （63）silence （silent）．So he asked，"Sir，can you tell me （64）whenI am going to learn something？"
"You'll learn，"the expert replied．Several more days went by．One morning，as the expert placed the stone ill the young man's hand，he shouted without （65）looking（look）at his hand，"This is not the same jade stone!"
"You have begun to learn，"said the expert．
15．（1）价格price（2）乘客passenger
（3）服务serve（4）国外abroad（5）记者reporter．
2．When I agreed to stage-manage my school's production of Guys and Dolls，I had no idea of（71）what a stage manager actually did．Still，I（72）decided（decide） that it would be a（n）（73）interesting（interest）experience，and a way to get involved with theater．Besides，if there was already a director and some technicians to build the sets and run lights，how much could there be （74）left（leave）for a stage manager to do？I figured that I would spend a lot of time（75）onrehearsals（彩排）and scripts（剧本）．
I was discouraged by the first rehearsal．I discovered that it was my（76）responsibility（responsible） to make sure that all of the cast actors were present，had scripts，and gave（77）me（I） their schedules before leaving the room．It was not an easy thing．I found that it was impossible （78）to get（get） all twenty-five cast members together for a group scene，since actors kept（79）calling（call）me with emergency appointments，and last-minute family gatherings．
Finally，it was the opening night．I sat to the side of the stage，（80）withmy script open on a music stand in front of me．The lights came up，the show began，and I knew that it had all been worthwhile．
19．Where is Larry now？
A．In his office．    B．At home．    C．In a classroom．
20．Why didn't the man answer the phone？
A．He lost it．
B．He didn't hear it．
C．His phone ran out of power．

违法和不良信息举报电话：027-86699610 举报邮箱：58377363@163.com

精英家教网