题目内容

寒假将至，班级里很多同学都打算去海南度假。就选择何种交通方式，班级进行了一场讨论。请你根据下表所提供的信息，客观地讨论情况，并阐述你自己的观点。

60%的同学选择坐飞机

40%的同学选择坐火车

1.速度快；

1.价格便宜

2.环境舒适；

2.能观赏沿途的风景；

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注意：字数120左右，文章开头已给出（不计词数）

The winter vacation approaching, there has been a heated discussion about the means of transport by which we like to travel to Hainan. _______________________________________________________________

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One possible version:

The winter vacation approaching ,there has been a heated discussion about the means of transport by which we like to travel to Hainan. Opinions are divided on this problem. About 60% of the classmates are in favor of the idea to take plane. In their opinions, nothing can match a plane for speed. Besides, the popularity of plane is due to the clean and comfortable environment and excellent service. While, 40% of the classmates show interest in taking train. The reason can be listed as follows. Firstly, compared with plane, the cost for a trip by train is quite low. Secondly, taking train, they can enjoy the natural beauty, which will be an unforgettable experience.

As far as I am concerned, I'd like to choose to travel in a train for safety and reasonable price. With beautiful scenery always in sight, train is my favorite form of transport in the travel.

【解析】

审题：题目中要求根据表中所提供的信息，客观地讨论情况，并阐述自己的观点。作者在第一段中首先说明60%的人倾向于做飞机，因为速度快并且环境舒适，然后又说明40%的同学会选择火车为交通工具，因为价格便宜并且能欣赏沿途的风景。最后，作者表达自己的观点，自己会选择火车，因为价格更加实惠，而且路上的风景十分优美。从而可以看出，作者在审题方面做得非常好，非常扣题。写作技巧：作者根据题目中要求来完成写作任务，条理清晰；文中运用了“Besides”“While”“Firstly”“Secondly”“As far as I am concerned”等连接词使行文更加流畅；文中使用了一些固定短语及搭配：be divided，attend school，in favor of，due to，compare with等使文章显得很干练；文中使用了较多的语法知识，定语从句they can enjoy the natural beauty, which will be an unforgettable experience，结果状语从句With beautiful scenery always in sight, train is my favourite form of transport in the travel。这些从句等语法的使用提升了文章的档次，将基本要点清晰地呈现在读者面前，同时也显示较高的语法知识点使用能力。问题指出：作者在陈述同学们选择飞机或者火车的原因时，仅仅用了表中分别提供的两点信息，没有增加一些信息，思维比较局限。

考点：考查材料类议论文作文。

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