题目内容
【题目】每年都有许多人出国旅游,一些人的不文明行为引起了社会的广泛关注。某英语报社正在举行以“文明出国旅游”为主题的讨论。假定你是李华,请你给报社专栏编辑写一封信,呼吁大家做文明游客。要点如下:
1. 尊重习俗;
2. 不高声喧哗;
3. 其它。
注意 1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语已为你写好。
Dear Editor,
I’ve read your discussion on how to behave properly when traveling abroad.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Editor,
I’ve read your discussion on how to behave properly when traveling abroad.
Every year, a great many holidaymakers go abroad for sightseeing and relaxation. While they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely, which causes a big problem. How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic.
In my opinion, it is necessary to watch our manners. First, we must respect and follow local customs. Besides, we’d better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others. Also, be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries. More importantly, we should bear in mind that we are representing our country while abroad, so we need to be cautious about how we act.
Only in this way can we enjoy our trip abroad and have beautiful memories as well.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文是提纲类作文,要点已给出。成文时要注意:1.文章主要用第一人称。2.时态:灵活变换。3.文章的内容要点要齐全:(1)尊重习俗;(2)不高声喧哗;(3)其它。4.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,以提高文章的档次;5.注意使用一些连接词,使得文章表达自然、流畅。6.注意文章的字数控制,100单词左右。
亮点说明:范文中运用一些短语enjoy oneself玩得高兴;in one’s opinion在某人看来;had better do最好做某事;More importantly更重要的是;While they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely, which causes a big problem.这个句子运用到which引导定语从句;Only in this way can we enjoy our trip abroad and have beautiful memories as well这个句子中运用到only +介词短语+部分倒装。