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12．假设你是李华，你校英文报"My Point of View"一栏拟刊登"家庭与孩子成长"有关的内容．现在很多家庭只有一个孩子，这样的环境对孩子的成长是否有利？如果一个家庭可以有两个孩子，那对孩子的成长又有什么样的利弊？请你就这个话题给校报编辑写一封信，谈谈你的看法．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Editor，
With the implementing of family planning policy，most families have only one child．                           ．

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分析 本篇书面表达属于开放类作文，根据提示信息你校英文报"My Point of View"一栏拟刊登"家庭与孩子成长"有关的内容．现在很多家庭只有一个孩子，这样的环境对孩子的成长是否有利？如果一个家庭可以有两个孩子，那对孩子的成长又有什么样的利弊？请你就这个话题给校报编辑写一封信，谈谈你的看法，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：分别从利和弊两个方面来讨论该话题 2、提示是文章的总体框架，要在适当范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：the lack of缺乏；deal with处理；basically基本上；contribute to有助于；take care of照顾；be beneficial to对…有益；in my view以我的观点来看
There are lots of problems with these children，one of which is the lack of the ability to deal with other people．（高分句型一） 
Recently a new policy has been adjusted nationwide，which allows a family to have two children．（高分句型二）ln the process of growing，the two can take care of each other，and share too much in common，which is beneficial to their character building and psychological health．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Editor，
       With the implementing of family planning policy，most families have only one child．There are lots of problems with these children，one of which is the lack of the ability to deal with other people．（高分句型一） Basically，when born in a family without siblings，a child is usually vain and arrogant，even sometimes indifferentand rebellious．All these disadvantages may contribute to unhappiness of his or her life．
       Recently a new policy has been adjusted nationwide，which allows a family to have two children．（高分句型二）ln the process of growing，the two can take care of each other，and share too much in common，which is beneficial to their character building and psychological health．（高分句型三）
        In my view，it is better to have two children in a family than only one．
                                                                                                                                                                                     Yours Sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                           Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．