Question

阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

SHANGHAI --- Police in Shanghai have asked a district procurator（检察官）to approve the arrest of a postgraduate student who admitted having killed his roommate by poisoning him.

    The suspect, a man surnamed Lin, who is attending medical school at Fudan University, held a jealousy against his 28-year-old roommate Huang Yang over a trivial thing and planned the poisoning, an initial police investigation showed.

    Lin took a deadly chemical compound from a university lab and used it to contaminate the water dispenser in their dormitory at noon on March 31, the investigation showed.

    Huang, a third-year medical postgraduate student at Fudan University, showed poisoned symptoms after drinking water from the dispenser on April 1 and was pronounced dead due to multiple organ failure on April 16.

【写作内容】

1. 以约30词概括短文的大意;

2. 然后以约120词就“同学之间该如何相处?”为主题发表看法，并包括如下要点：

（1）同学之间因成长环境、家庭教育和性格等的不同存在很大差异；

（2）在相处时发生冲突（conflict)的原因：如遇事不够冷静、为小事争吵等;

（3）同学之间应该如何相处。

【写作要求】

1. 可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接抄袭原文中的句子；

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

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Answer 1

【答案】

The above passage mainly tells us that Shanghai police have asked to be approved to arrest a Fudan postgraduate student, who has poisoned his roommate to death only because of a trivial matter.

After reading the news, I was greatly shocked and many ideas crowded into my mind. Actually, there are many differences between students who come from different families. Since students are brought up in different environments, they will have different habits and characters, which will cause many conflicts in daily life. In such cases, these youngsters will often act impulsively, quarreling or even fighting with his or her classmates because of some trivial things. They may curse each other with hatred words or ask their friends to isolate these students. What’s worse, they may find some excuses to hurt, beat or even bully those who have conflicts with them. As a result, students are not able to get along well with each other.

As far as I am concerned, as a teenager, though we mostly come from a one-child family, we should learn to share, to help each other and to endure. After all, to err is human, but to forgive is divine. If conflicts happen, we should look before we leap and after a second thought, we will keep a harmonious relation with our classmates, roommates and friends.

 

【解析】

试题分析：这篇书面表达给了一段材料：先要求以约30个词概括本文的故事，再以约120个词写一篇短文，内容包括：（1）同学之间的差异；（2）冲突的原因；（3）同学之间怎样相处。这道题目要求比较严格，所以在写作之前一定要看清题目。题目还要求你可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。写作时尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型，同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。

考点：考查读写任务作文

点评：本文属于根据原文内容写作，动笔前，一定要认真阅读原文，并理解内容。认真看清题目要求，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。