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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌的作文。文中共有10处错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧,并在其下面写出该加的词
删除:把多余的词用斜线﹨划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today is my Dad’s birthday. This afternoon I went to the shopping center downtown and bought present for him. Then I take the subway train home. Sitting on the train, I thought my dad would be very happy when I saw the present. At the next station, an old lady with two heavy bags got in the train and stood in the front of me. She looked tiredly. I hesitated for a moment, and then offered my seat to hers. The old lady thanked me a lot and seated down. Seen her smile, I felt happy. I will always be ready to help other in the future.


【小题1】present前加a
【小题2】take改为took
【小题3】I改为he
【小题4】in改为on;
【小题5】front前面的the去掉
【小题6】tiredly改为tired
【小题7】hers改为her
【小题8】seated改为sat或者后面接herself
【小题9】see改为seeing
【小题10】other改为others

解析试题分析:
【小题1】present前加a 名词present是一个可数名词,前面用a修饰,指一件礼物。
【小题2】take改为took 本文讲述的是过去发生的事情,所以使用一般过去时。
【小题3】I改为he      句意分析:当他看见这份礼物的时候我认为他会很高兴。
【小题4】in改为on; 在火车上使用介词短语on the train。
【小题5】front前面的the去掉 固定短语in front of在…前面;in the front of在…前部;这里是指一个老年女性站在我的前面。
【小题6】tiredly改为tired 形容词tired放在系动词look的后面,形成系表结构。
【小题7】hers改为her 本句是指我把我的位置让给了她。Her作为to的宾语,要使用宾格。
【小题8】seated改为sat或者后面接herself 动词seat是一个及物动词,后面要接宾语。本句后面只有down使用可以使用不及物动词sit,或者在后面接herself。
【小题9】see改为seeing 本句的see与后面句子主语I构成主动关系,使用现在分词做状语。
【小题10】other改为others others指代其他人。
考点:考查学生在上下文语境中对词汇语法的掌握情况
点评:本题考查较为细致,要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致,时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型,固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子,这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累,熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文,标出出错的位置,改完以后还得细读短文,看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺,符合逻辑。

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写得以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

  2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。

Many years ago, I was travelling in the northwest of Indian. One evening, after hunting in the

                                           

forest all day, I was returning alone to the place which I had put up my tent. It was growing dark

                                       

but I was walking along a narrow path. On my right was a wide river, and on my left , thick dark

                                                                

forest. Suddenly, I saw two eyes looking at me from among the trees. A tiger was about to jump

 

on me. What should I do? Should I jump into the river and hoped to save my life by swimming?

                                             

I looked to the right. In the river there was a huge crocodile waited to welcome me with its

                                               

mouth widely open. I was so frightened that I closed my eyes. When I opened it, what do you

                                         

think was happened? The tiger had jumped right over me and was now in the mouth of the

  

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