题目内容
【题目】A blind boy sat on the steps of a building with a box by his feet. He held up a sigh which read, “I am blind, please help.” there were only a few coins in the box. They boy felt sad.
A man walked by. He took out a few coins from his pocket and dropped them into the box. Then he took the sigh, turned it around and wrote some words. He put the sigh back so that everyone who recognized his footsteps and asked, “Were you the one who changed my sign this morning? What did you write?“
Then man said, “I only wrote the truth. I said what you said but in a different way.”
What he had written was, “Today is a beautiful day but I can not see it.”
【写作内容】
以约30个词概括短文的要点;
然后以约120个词就”一个好主意“这个主题谈谈你的看法,内容包括:
1)结合以上故事,简单谈谈你对“好主意”的理解
2)请介绍你或你身边的人一个解决问题的好主意
3)怎样才能使自己常常有好主意:
【写作要求】
作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【答案】
A blind boy got little help when begging for money from others with some words written on a sign. But he finally attracted many other pedestrians’ attention after a passer-by offered to rewrite those words, receiving much help.
The story shows the power of “a good idea”. Instead of dealing with problems directly, people with a smart idea often see things in an unusual and unique angle, showing an ability to catch inspiration in life.
Years ago when my mother bought some expensive foods, she always refused to have some and let me eat them all. One day I got an idea. I often pretended that I couldn’t judge whether the foods are fresh and always asked her to try first, changing her habit without wordy persuasion.
As creativity does not come from nowhere, people need to not only collect wisdom and beauty in life actively,but also have a free mind. When we do not care much about rules, we are not far away from an excellent idea.
【解析】
试题分析:本篇作文是一篇开放式议论文,规定要点为四部分。需要注意:每个要点都要涵盖,注意语句的衔接。不要出现真实姓名和学校。
【高分短语和句型】
1.attract one’s attention 吸引某人的注意。
2. instead of. 代替。
3. refuse to do. 拒绝做某事。
4. 非谓语:eople with a smart idea often see things in an unusual and unique angle, showing an ability to catch inspiration in life.
5.省略:A blind boy got little help when begging for money from others with some words written on a sign