题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,几天前外教Joan 离任回英国,你为她在网上购买了一套陶瓷茶具作为礼物。她来邮件说已收到,很喜欢,不过发现有个杯子破了。请回邮件表达歉意,并请她发照片过来,由你和商家联系发。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Joan,
I’m glad that you like the gift I bought you online the other day. Meanwhile, I’m sorry to know that one of the china tea-cups is broken. But take it easy. The shop owner online has promised to send another one on condition that he is convinced that the cup was broken on the way. So I’d like you to take a photo of the broken cup and send it to me. I’ll show the shop owner what has happened to the cup with the photo as evidence. I’m sure he’ll send you another cup of the same colour and size. What you’ll have to do now is to wait for a few days until the new cup arrives.
【解析】该书面表达为道歉书信。这篇作文要求我们根据所给要点,写一封道歉书信,我们可以根据提示将这些信息进行整理和安排,使文章的意思衔接更自然。当然我们要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词,使文章上下文意思连贯,更出彩。
【亮点说明】本篇作文完成得条理清楚、结构清晰和要点全面,并使用了高级句型和高级词汇,如:宾语从句:Meanwhile, I’ll show the shop owner what has happened to the cup with the photo as evidence. 主语从句:What you’ll have to do now is to wait for a few days until the new cup arrives.