英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文.假设以下短文为你同桌所写.请你对其进行修改.文中共有10处错误.每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改. 增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧.并在此符号下面写出该加的词. 删除:把多余的词用斜线＼划掉. 修改:在错词下面划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词. 注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词, 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下短文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。

修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。

Thanks for you mail. I’m glad to know you are interested in the 2014 Florida Winter Camp. It will be held from January 27 to February 13, during that time you will get wonderful experience. You will have chances to improve your speaking English in the courses providing. Also, activities arranged for you to spend weekends together with your host family, so you can learn American English in authentic situations. However, a trip to the local Disneyland will certainly add up the fun of the camp.

Join in the camp and you will have the better knowledge of American culture and life. You are sure to benefit from it.

Yours truly

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Joe,

Thanks for you mail. I’m glad to know you are interested in the 2014 Florida Winter Camp. It will

your

be held from January 27 to February 13, during that time you will get ∧wonderful experience. You will

which a 或 experiences

have chances to improve your speaking English in the courses providing. Also, activities ∧arranged for

spoken provided are

you to spend weekends together with your host family, so you can learn American English in authentic

situations. However, a trip to the local Disneyland will certainly add up the fun of the camp.

Besides/Also/ Moreover to

Join in the camp and you will have the better knowledge of American culture and life. You are sure

to benefit from it.

Yours truly

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：

人称代词用法错误。名词前应当用人称代词的所有格形式

关系词用法错误。定语从句中，介词后只可接which。

名词用法错误。experience作为“经验”讲为可数名词。故需要加冠词或加复数形式。

形容词用法错误。英语口语应当表达为spoken English。

分词用法错误。provide和所修饰名词courses之间为被动关系，故用过去分词。

语态错误。这里应当用被动语态，故需要加上are。

连词用法错误。这里前后句为递进关系，故用Besides/Also/ Moreover Besides/Also/ Moreover。

And-but when we got there 连词用法错误。前后句应当是转折关系，故用but。

短语用法错误。add to增加，增添。

冠词用法错误。knowledge本身为不可数名词，但前有形容词修饰需要用冠词a。

考点：考查词汇和语法的用法

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