Question

16．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
          2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
We are in an age when people take picture everywhere．They enjoy it even when in a museum or invited for a meal．A report shows that teens in many countries，especially in China，is always seen taking pictures update their websites with them．Besides，they are serious about getting 100 likes because of getting anything less is considered embarrassed．Some parents worry that this type of thinking is far too competitively for teens．And some teens don't think so．"If I got wrap up in my likes or views，I'd go crazy．Never let your values be determined by how someone else thinks．"

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分析 文章大意：我们处于一个年代，人们到处拍照片．一个报道表明，很多国家尤其在中国，我们经常看到青少年拍照更新网页．这些青少年不在乎别人的看法．．

解答 We are in an age when people take  pictureeverywhere．They enjoy it even when in a museum or invited  for a meal．
                                                      pictures                                                                                         to
A report shows that teens in many countries，especially in China，is always seen taking pictures∧update their websites with them．
                                                                                                  are                                      to
Besides，they are serious about getting 100 likes because  of  getting anything less is considered embarrassed．Some parents worry
                                                                                     去掉                                                 embarrassing
that this type of thinking is far too competitively  for teens．And some teens don't think so．"If I got wrap up in my likes or views，
                                                    competitive                   But                                                           wrapped
I'd go crazy．Never let your values be determined by how someone else thinks．"
                                                                                 what

1．take picture 改成take pictures    考查名词单复数． take pictures 是固定短语，意思是"拍照片"，picture是可数名词，所以用复数． 
2．invited for 改成invited to  考查介词搭配． invite sb to sth是固定搭配，用介词to，不是for．
3．is always改成 are always     考查主谓一致．本句主语是teens，所以用are．
4．update 改成 to update 考查不定式． see sb do sth 看到某人做某事，当用于被动语态时，sb  be seen to do sth，do前面要加上to．
5．because of 改成 because     考查从属连词．后面是句子，of是介词，because of后面跟的是名词或名词短语．所以去掉of．
6．embarrassed改成embarrassing 考查形容词，修饰物或事情用-ing形式．本句的主语是动名词，所以用embarrassing．
7．competitively 改成 competitive  考查形容词． 系动词后面应该用形容词．
8．And 改成 But 考查连词，前后两句是转折关系，所以用but．
9．got wrap 改成 got wrapped      考查语态． get wrapped up意思是沉溺于…，该短语应该用被动式，所以用wrapped．
10．by how 改成 by what 考查名词性从句，by 后面是宾语从句，从句中缺少宾语，所以用what．

点评 短文改错主要要求考生掌握各种句法、语法知识，根据一些规律，再结合文章的意思作出正确的该正．注意文章的时态和人称．