Question

【题目】假定你是学生李华，今年9月将赴加拿大进修学习半年。请给你的加拿大笔友Mike写一封邮件，希望他能帮你找一个合租公寓。要点如下:

1. 对公寓的要求；

2. 对室友(roommate)的要求；

3. 表达感谢。

注意:1. 100词左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mike,

I am writing to ask you to lend me a hand. ______________________________________________________

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Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mike,

I am writing to ask you to lend me a hand. This September, I am going to Canada for further education for half a year. I wonder if you could help me find a proper flat and a roommate.

As for the flat, I would really like to rent one with a kitchen, since I am not quite used to Western food and I love cooking. Internet access is a must. As you know, some assignments will require students to search for information on the Internet.

I would prefer a roommate who is friendly and respects others’ privacy. If he/she is easy-going, it would be much nicer.

I am extremely grateful for all your help. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这篇书面表达属于应用类作文，要求写一封电子邮件。

第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是学生李华，今年9月将赴加拿大进修学习半年。请给你的加拿大笔友Mike写一封邮件，希望他能帮你找一个合租公寓。人称为第一人称，时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：further education进修，wonder想知道，proper合适的，rent租，Internet access互联网接入，assignment作业，search for寻找，prefer更喜欢，privacy隐私，easy-going随和的，grateful感激的。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。