题目内容
9．假设你是红星中学高二（1）班的学生李华，你的英国笔友Chris刚刚转学，感到一切都很陌生．他在邮件中向你询问如何尽快融入新环境．请你根据以下信息回信．1．多跟同学交流沟通；
2．积极参加学校活动；
3．向老师寻求帮助．
注意：
1．词数：100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
分析 这是一封提纲类书信．感根据题目要求可知用第一人称来叙述，时态以一般现在时态为主．内容主要包括：一 点明写信的目的；二提出建议，包括多跟同学交流沟通；积极参加学校活动；向老师寻求帮助．三表达意愿．
高分句型：
1．Second，it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities，which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships．句子里it做形式主语，代指to take part in more activities；which引导定语从句，先行词是 activities．
第二，多参加活动对你来说是个好主意，这些活动包括和其他同学的合作和交流，因此对于发展友好关系有好处．
2．Lastly，faced with some tough problems，you might consider asking your teachers，who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions．句子里，faced with 做状语，和主语you之间是被动关系；who引导定语从句，代指先行词your teachers．
最后，面对难题，你可以向你的老师请教，他们通常能够给你提出一些合理化的建议，
解答 Dear Chris，
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school．Such problems are quite normal．Perhaps the following suggestions may be helpful to you．（点明写信的目的）
First，I think you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible．In this way，you will get to know each other better．Second，it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities，which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships．【高分句型一】Lastly，faced with some tough problems，you might consider asking your teachers，who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions．【高分句型二】（提出建议，包括多跟同学交流沟通；积极参加学校活动；向老师寻求帮助．）
I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you．If there is anything more I can do to help，please let me know．（表达意愿）
Yours，
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
