Question

Health Magazine 就现代人的健康状况进行了调查，其结果是，与以前相比，人们的健康状况有下滑现象。其原因主要有：1.工作忙碌,压力过大，缺少锻炼；2.生活没有规律,熬夜，休息不够；3.不少人有抽烟、喝酒的习惯。

请根据调查情况写一篇100~120个词的短文，内容包括：

1.与过去相比，人们的健康状况；

2.下滑的主要原因；

3.建议：至少给出两点。

注意：短文的开头已给出（不计词数）。

Recently, the Health Magazine has conducted a survey of people’s health condition.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Recently, the Health Magazine has conducted a survey of people’s health condition. Compared with the past, people are in poorer condition.

  One of the main reasons is that people are living a hectic life without taking enough exercise and suffer lots of stress. Besides, most of them have to stay up late at night with so little time to rest, making their lives quite irregular. Worse still, a number of these people have got into the habit of smoking and drinking alcohol.

  To change this, one should form a good living habit by doing physical exercise regularly and try to keep away from cigarette and alcohol.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于提纲类的作文，文字提示中给出了部分要点，在个人建议方面需要考生做适当的补充。可以从加强锻炼，改变不健康的生活方式，让生活有规律等方面着手。难点在于选择合适的词准确表达文字提示中所需要表达的意思，要选择高级的词汇和句型来提高文章的层次和档次。

考点：考查提纲类作文写作

点评：提纲类的作文关键是要点要全面覆盖，不能有遗漏和省略，在个人建议方面要做适当的发挥，可以从改变自己的生活方式方面着手，也可以从改变对健康的态度方面着手，可以加入与健康有关的谚语来提升文章的层次。