题目内容
【题目】如今,我们身边不乏“低头族”。他们在与朋友聚会、家人团聚或乘坐交通工具时,常常低头忙于浏览手机。请简要描述此现象,并发表你的看法。
提示词:低头族phubbing
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语己为你写好。
【答案】The phenomenon that people are always phubbing is becoming more and more popular. Some people only stare at the screens of their phones, ignoring the people around them no matter when they take a bus, hold a party or even get together with their families. Worse still, they will not miss the chance of surfing the Internet or playing the games when they cross the road, which is likely to cause serious accidents and threaten their lives.
It is high time that we threw away the phone and raised our heads up. Do cherish the ones around us and appreciate the splendid scenery ahead of us.
【解析】本文是应用文,要求学生就低头族现象发表自己的看法,故应用一般现在时和第三人称。
文章要点全,语法知识应用灵活,且使用得当,堪称佳作。开头第一句使用that引导同位语从句抓住了阅卷教师的眼球。使用分词短语ignoring作伴随状语,no matter when引导让步状语从句,when引导时间状语从句,which引导非限制性定语从句,还使用了It is high time that句型和并列祈使句等,还有worse still等的灵活应用等都彰显了作者的扎实的英语功底。