Question

【题目】请根据你对以下两幅图的理解， 以”bring back a bluer sky” 为题用英语写一篇作文。

1. 简要描述两幅图的内容。

2. 概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解。

3. 谈谈这两幅对你的启示。

注意：参考词汇：秸秆straw雾霾 smog

可参考图片适当发挥；作文词数150左右。

Answer 1

【答案】

People take different attitudes towards environmental protection . In Picture 1, a farmer is burning straws, black smoke rising into the air while Picture 2 shows some volunteers launch a campaign to call attention to the issue.

Obviously, the farmer hasn’t recognized what damage straw burning will cause----smog, a kind of heavy air pollution. How can we deal with such a phenomenon? The answer is definitely the latter. Immediate action should be taken to raise people’s awareness of environmental protection.

We have only one earth. We want to bring back a blue sky. In my opinion, the government should adopt new policies to ban farmers from burning straws. Besides, various activities need to be organized to make it clear to people that everyone is responsible for a healthy environment. Meanwhile, it would be rewarding to educate people about ways of living that benefit the environment . Let’s work together, right now!

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达是关于图片描写的，首先要简要描述两幅图的内容接着概述对两幅图中不同做法的理解，最后谈谈这两幅的启示。 依据写作要求首先要对两幅图的内容进行对比式的概述，注意描述过程中的细节描绘；第二段中的要注意对不同做法的概述，突出二者的不同性所在；第三段中的“启示”要注意对出现的问题应该采取怎样的措施。

【亮点说明】文章采用三段式，语言质朴，内容齐全，布局合理，使用高级句子。the farmer hasn’t recognized what damage straw burning will cause----smog,采用名词性从句表达；obviously，besides，meanwhile等连接词的使用使得行文更加流畅；Immediate action should be taken to raise people’s awareness of environmental protection; various activities need to be organized to make it clear to people that everyone is responsible for a healthy environment等被动语态的使用使得文章句子表达更为地道。