Question

11．请你根据所给提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍微信（WeChat）的利与弊，并发表在校英文论坛上．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
More and more people are beginning to use WeChat and some have even become addicted to it．However，WeChat has both advantages and disadvantages．
WeChat really shortens the distance between people．No matter where we are，we can easily contact our friends．Besides，we can find friends to whom we can tell our secrets which we don't want our families to know．However，it also has disadvantages．First，some information offered in WeChat is false and it may result in people being cheated．Second，some people spend too much time on WeChat，greatly influencing theirnormal life．
Ithink WeChat is convenient but we should use it properly．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇介绍微信（WeChat）的利与弊的短文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一提出话题；二论述微信（We Chat）的利与弊；三总结自己的看法．高分句型：1．Besides，we can find friends to whom we can tell our secrets which we don't want our families to know．句子里 whom引导定语从句 we can tell our secrets，代指先行词 friends；which引导定语从句 we don't want our families to know，代指先行词 our secrets．此外，我们可以找到朋友，对他们述说我们不想要家人知道的秘密．2．Second，some people spend too much time on We Chat，greatly influencing their normal life．句子里spend too much time on表示"花费太多的时间在某事上"； influencing是现在分词做结果状语．第二，一些人花费太多的时间在微信上，严重影响了他们正常的生活．

解答 More and more people are beginning to use We Chat and some have even become addicted to it．However，We Chat has both advantages and disadvantages．（提出话题）
    We Chat really shortens the distance between people．No matter where we are，we can easily contact our friends．Besides，we can find friends to whom we can tell our secrets which we don't want our families to know．【高分句型一】However，it also has disadvantages．First，some information offered in We Chat is false and it may result in people being cheated．Second，some people spend too much time on We Chat，greatly influencing their normal life．【高分句型二】（论述微信（We Chat）的利与弊）
    I think We Chat is convenient but we should use it properly．（总结自己的看法）

点评 考查开放类作文．开放类作文注意：1．仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点． 2．提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写． 3．根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯．