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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在该句下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　My grandfather and I enjoy fishing．

　　One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake．We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake．As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water．Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently．I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer．Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught．Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish．Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish．It was delicious．

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解析：

　　1．答案：go-went

　　2．答案：ours-our

　　3．答案：去掉we前的so

　　4．答案：before-after

　　5．答案：impatiently-impatient

　　6．答案：and-but

　　7．答案：were-was

　　8．答案：fish前加a

　　9．答案：minute-minutes

　　10．答案：feel-feeling

　　解析：1．时态上下文不一致，根据文意应使用一般过去时。

　　2．考查物主代词用法。修饰名词用形容词性物主代词。

　　3．考查连词。上文有as soon as引导时间状语从句，故so多余。

　　4．语义错误。句意：等了半小时之后。

　　5．形容词和副词辨析。做系动词get的表语用形容词。

　　6．考查并列连词。此处为转折关系。

　　7．考查主谓一致。There be句型的就近原则，a student poll为单数。

　　8．考查冠词。此处fish为可数名词，故前加a。

　　9．考查名词单复数。根据句意为复数。

　　10．考查非谓语动词。动词feel与主语we为主动关系，故用现在分词。


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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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Do you still remember that night twenty years ago? When I suddenly fell ill, you carried me to nearest hospital. Moreover, you attended to me careful while I was staying in hospital. Later, you managed to help me with my lesson. Without your help, I can not have passed the exam. Though we are parting soon, but I will keep the favors you’ve ever done me in mind.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限1词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

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增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

  2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

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　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　　　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

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