题目内容

5．众所周知，野生动物是宝贵的自然资源，是人类的朋友．但是由于生态环境的恶化、野生动物栖息地的人为破坏，致使我国野生动物的数量日益减少，许多物种濒临灭绝．请根据这一现状写一封倡议书，呼吁大家携手保护野生动物．要点包括：
1、野生动物的现状及产生的原因；
2、保护野生动物的建议：①禁止肆意捕杀野生动物 ②…③…
注意：
1、作文开头已经给出，请接着写．可自己补充内容，使文章更加连贯．
2、字数要求：100-120
3、参考词汇：生态环境 ecological environment
Let's work hand in hand to protect wildlife
It is well known that wildlife，a kind of valuable natural resources，is our friends．

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息谈论保护野生动物的话题．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：野生动物的现状及产生的原因；保护野生动物的建议：①禁止肆意捕杀野生动物 ②…③…2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：at present目前；in great danger of dying out处于灭绝的危险中；Therefore因此；live in peace with和…和平相处；make a contribution to对…做出贡献

解答 Let's work hand in hand to protect wildlife
It is well known that wildlife，a kind of valuable natural resources，is our friends．But at present，the number of wildlife in our country is decreasing rapidly and some rare animals are even in great danger of dying out（高分句型）．There are many reasons for the depressing situation．For example，the ecological environment is getting worse and worse and the habitat of some wildlife has been destroyed because of human activities．（高分句型）
Therefore，it is time for human beings to take action to protect wildlife before it is too late．Strict laws should be passed to prevent wildlife being hunted or killed without mercy．（高分句型）And it will be greatly helpful if people protect the habitat of wildlife and learn to live in peace with wildlife．（高分句型）
My dear friends，to protect wildlife is to protect ourselves，so let's work hand in hand and make a contribution to wildlife protection．（高分句型）

点评 应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯，比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词，使文章流畅、通顺，并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感．（1）认真审题，确定体裁． （2）构思要点．根据题目要求，理解要表达的要点．设计好文章的层次段落，考虑所用时态、人称等，把要点串联起来，构成文章框架．（3）选词造句，避难选易．（4）认真检查，避免错误．仔细阅读全文，查找是否有错，注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误，句式是否正确．逻辑是否一致．

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