题目内容
【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“科技让生活更美好”为主题的社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记述参观科技公司的整个过程。
注意: 词数不少于60。
提示词:3D打印机 3D printer
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【答案】Last Friday, our class organized an activity themed “Technology makes life better”.
In the morning, we set off for a technology company. An engineer there welcomed us and gave a lecture on 3D printing, introducing its history, development and application in fields like architecture, medicine, etc. Then he showed us how the 3D printer works. We were amazed at the magic of technology and couldn’t wait to give it a try. Our group first designed a 3D model of a bike and then operated the printer as instructed. Watching the bike gradually taking shape, we felt excited. When all our works were displayed on the table, we admired them and some took photos to record this unforgettable experience.
This is really an educative and eye-opening activity in which I was impressed with the convenience and benefits brought by technology.
【解析】
这是一篇图画类写作。
第1步:根据提示可知,假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“科技让生活更美好”为主题的社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记述参观科技公司的整个过程。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):set off (出发);3D printer (3D打印机);architecture (建筑学);be amazed at (惊讶于);give it a try (尝试);be impressed with(对……印象深刻)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。