题目内容
【题目】假如你是John,你的朋友李华今年考入了北京大学,请用英语给他写封信,信的内容包括:
1.高兴他考入北京大学;
2.请他传授一些学习方法;
3.祝他在大学里生活学习愉快。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Li Hua,
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Yours,
John
【答案】Dear Li Hua,
Sincere congratulations on your admission to Peking University! I’m really delighted to see that your hard work has paid off.
Since I am going to take the National College Entrance Examination next year, I hope that you can share some effective methods you used in high school. For example, how did you reasonably manage your time? Sometimes I do not even have enough time to finish my homework. Moreover, could you please tell me how to deal with stress and anxiety? I have been under pressure for a long time, espcially when I am not satisfied with my grades. Thank you very much indeed.
May you enjoy yourself in Peking University! Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
John
【解析】本文是一篇祝贺信。你的朋友李华今年考入了北京大学,请用英语给他写封信祝贺信、包括以下内容:1.高兴他考入北京大学;2.请他传授一些学习方法;3.祝他在大学里生活学习愉快。写信的语言应做到真诚、自然和亲切。
亮点:本文结构完整,条理清楚。语言真诚。使用了多种句式。如宾语从句,状语从句,祁使句等,同时还使用了复杂句。在文章中使用了许多的固定搭配及高级词汇,让增添了文章的色彩,更生动活泼。而连词moreover等的运用让文章更有条理。
文章中运用了由that引导的宾语从句:I’m really delighted to see that your hard work has paid off。由when引导的时间状语从句:I have been under pressure for a long time, espcially when I am not satisfied with my grade。和祁使句:May you enjoy yourself in Peking University!
一般疑问句:could you please tell me how to deal with stress and anxiety? 而复杂句:Since I am going to take the National College Entrance Examination next year, I hope that you can share some effective methods you used in high school.复杂句的使用给文章增色不少。
在文章中大量使用固定搭配如:Sincere congratulations on … be delighted to do.,pay off,manage one’s time , be satisfied with,enjoy oneself等,使文章更有层次感。使用了连词如moreover,让文章更有条理。