[题目]假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:每处错误及其修改均仅限一� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

Some day I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English. I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprised, I found the oral English of some junior students were better than me. I asked them for advice and they told me to practice more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions. With time went by, I found that I could even communicate some college students freely.

【答案】第一处： Some→One

第二处：there→where

第三处： surprised→surprise

第四处： were→was

第五处： me→mine

第六处； But→So

第七处： practise→practising

第八处：去掉from

第九处：With →As或者went→going

第十处： communicate后加with

【解析】

本文是一篇记叙文，讲述了我无意间在QQ上发现一个英语聊天室，在那里练习一段时间的口语后，我的口语有了很大的提高。

第一处：考查固定搭配。句意：有一天，我偶然在QQ发现一个聊天室，在那里人们用英语聊天。one day表示“一天”，常位于句首作时间状语，故Some改为One。

第二处：考查非限定性定语从句。句意同上，此处为非限定性定语从句，先行词为a chatting room，从句中缺少地点状语，故there改为where。

第三处：考查名词。句意：令我惊讶的是，我发现一些初中生的口语比我的（口语）好。作介词to的宾语用名词，故surprised改为surprise。

第四处：考查主谓一致。句意同上，从句的主语是the oral English，谓语动词用第三人称单数，故were改为was。

第五处：考查名词性物主代词。句意同上，此处指代my oral English，应该用名词性物主代词，故me改为mine。

第六处；考查连词。句意：所以从那以后，我每天都会花一个小时在QQ上练习口语。根据句意可知前后是因果而非转折关系，此处表示结果，故But改为So。

第七处：考查非谓语动词。句意同上，spend time doing表示“花时间做某事”，故 practise改为practising。

第八处：考查learn和learn from的区别。句意：日复一日，我学会了很多有用的单词和短语。learn表示“学会”，learn from表示“向……学习”，故去掉from。

第九处：考查固定句式/with的复合结构。句意：随着时间的推移，我发现我甚至可以自如地与一些大学生交流。as time goes by表示“随着时间的推移”，此处也可理解成with的复合结构，time与go之间是逻辑上的主谓关系，表示主动，用现在分词作宾补，故With 改为As或者went改为going。

第十处：考查固定短语。句意同上，communicate with表示“与……交流”，故在communicate后加with。

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