Question

假定你是李华。在最近的一次班会上，你班同学们就“高三学生是否需要吃补品来保持健康”展开了讨论。请根据下表提供的信息用英语写一篇短文，并谈一些你自己的看法，给某英语杂志投稿。

60％的同学认为	40％的同学认为
1．坚持锻炼，无需吃任何补品(tonic)。	1．高三阶段课业繁重，很多同学经常感到疲劳。
2．过多摄人补品会增加体重，对健康不利。	2．补品可以帮助恢复精力。
3．价格比较贵。	3．没时间锻炼身体。

注意：1．词数：100左右。短文开头已为你写好，不计人词数。

      2．内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。

I'm writing to tell about the discussion we've had in the recent class meeting about whether Senior 3 students should take a lot of tonics to keep fit.

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Answer 1

I'm writing to tell about the discussion we've had in the recent class meeting about whether Senior 3 students should take a lot of tonics to keep fit.

Opinions are divided on the topic. Sixty percent of the students think it unnecessary to take any tonics. They hold the opinion that taking tonics will cause them to put on weight, which is bad for their health. What's more, the price of tonics is rather high.

However, forty percent of the students point out that Senior 3 students have a lot more homework to do every day. So many students get tired and tonics can help to refresh themselves. 

解析:

文章行文力争自然流畅，文章要点齐全，意思表达真切。详略得当，重点突出。从语言使用的角度来说，要使用一些生动的动词，准确的名词，同时为了使本文串联自然，可以使用时间状语为连接词，将文章按照时间顺序叙述完整。