Question

假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。

I’m the mother of a sixteen-year-old. I have a rule for my daughter：be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school，but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong?

写作要点：

1．表明自己的看法；

2．陈述自己的理由(可举例说明)；

3．提出至少两条建议。

要求：

1．短文须写在指定区域。

2．短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。

3．内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。

4．书写须清晰、工整。

Hi，TigerMom，

What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.

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Yours

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi，TigerMom，

What_puzzles_you_is_actually_a_puzzle_for_many_parents_in_China.  In my opinion, what you think and what you do are not suitable.

Although high grades are important in assessing students and for their future university admission，development in wisdom，emotion，health，and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some top  students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they are expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Besides，punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.

So I suggest that you take your friends’ advice. More importantly，let her live like a lovely girl；let her have more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.

【解析】本文是关于现在非常流行的一种教育方法：虎妈。很多人对这样的教育方法有不同的看。我们在写作的过程中要注意使用高级词汇，高级句型，和合适的连接词如besides，会让文章更流畅。